This land ~*AWARDED*~
This land is made upof a patchwork of my memories.Each hill and valleyan echo of my past.Today we drove for miles and miles.Past the gold mines,and I remembered.I remembered the daymy parents split...
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Alylonna,I enjoy these types of poems where the writer reminisces and finds enlightenment within. This was a pleasurable stroll to take with you but regretfully there are many children who have to...
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Absolutely loving way to show memory tied to place, and how no matter what else is felt or done between adults, it is the children who are still growing, still learning, still needing a youth. What...
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Quote:A view so breath-taking that my soul was hushed.And, with a smile,I remembered.Your wonderful memories make me want to go to Wales, Riv! I love the entire poem and you closed with chill-evoking...
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beautifully woven, thank you for sharing such a rich tapestry.......
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(((((ALYLONNA)))))Such a beautiful sight I'm sure to behold. *HUGS* Great write, Aly. *HUGS*"A life without passion is not a life;it is merely an existence." - Leslie Fieger
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This laid out before me a landscape so beautiful that I was glad to be able to see through your eyes :) I have to admit though ... this line threw me for a moment ..Quote:where we bought our first...
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Hey! There you BE! :) you gotta little bit of a fee here ya need to pay for being away like that. I know, blows don't it?Have to take it up with the boss. Hey, sorry! Not my rule....??.....I just...
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Aww thanks everyone. It's good to be back :)A fee Mike? Pray what is the fee? I hope it's not too expensive. And interest next time? Damn....better make sure I don't go away again!!By the way, it's...
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Quote:This land is made upof a patchwork of my memories.Each hill and valleyan echo of my past.Today we drove for miles and miles.Past the gold mines,and I remembered.I remembered the daymy parents...
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((((~Riv~)))))What a beautiful journey of memory's highways you've taken us upon in each breath of these beautiful verses, lovely lady.....I've never been to Wales, but I feel as if I've journey'd...
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AlylonnaThis is an absolutely beautiful magic carpet ride of memories, most enchanting journey. A beautiful read this morning.FairEllen
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Thankyou so much for the award Fairellen!!! I'm very touched. I'm glad this poem made you smile this morning.Also thanks to everyone else for your wonderful and encouraging comments. Dawn, it was...
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Congratulations on your award, Riv!Awesome writing! Rick "When you hang out with angels, you learn how to fly."
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**~Riv~**The scenes you depict are vividly whispered... both the happy and the sad memories...Quote:Past Rhayader Valewhere we used to roll down the windowsand sing gospel musicto the mountainsfor the...
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